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You've got your big plans and I've got my songs.
And someday you'll fall in love in a far off place.
Your springs will come and your summers pass
     and your dreams will shine their light,
But even then the final won't be the last.

You'll think that he's the one but you're not satisfied.
He makes you feel alive but you're not whole.
You'll spend your time and you'll share your life
     but it never seems quite right,
You always feel there's something you don't like.

We had the time,
We could've changed our minds,
But there's no way back there now.

The past is cold
And the future holds
the dark uncharted ground.

-Insert appropriate guitar solo here-

I wake up every day and I hear your voice,
It tells me I have to carry out the day.
I've tried so hard to let you go
     but you own a piece of me.
I wonder if you'll ever, ever know.

Ever night I fall asleep to your pain;
I know that somewhere we both missed the point.
I tell myself that I never cared
     but in truth I never stopped.
I only wish you somehow could be here.

I know deep down
That I'll never change;
I'll keep living life this way.

And that hole you feel,
You know the truth;
Admit it, he's not me...
Yeah baby! It's a ballad! Kinda based loosely on some rhythmic patterns from Journey's "Faithfully." Umm.. It's about the same girl that other poem is. Cool? I don't know, we've all got someone we love to hate.

Again, it's still a work in progress, but I hope you enjoy it, and maybe I can set it to music someday, it would take on a whole new light then. Until then, just enjoy the words.
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The-Rivers-Phoenix Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008
I really really like this....alot. :)

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RebelAssasin311 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I'm glad someone appreciates it haha
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